The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 384 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
04/14/11
How far we've come in the last 250 years. Thanks for reminding us of our past. Your title could easily be applied to this current period in history. I would consider limiting the use of
"she" in the story, and using separate sentences for dialogue so that the piece presents better.
04/18/11
Great description- you had me right there with Daisy. Can't imagine what it was like in those times. Nicely done.
Congratulations Congratulations for ranking 30 th overall.