The Official Writing Challenge
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How far we've come in the last 250 years. Thanks for reminding us of our past. Your title could easily be applied to this current period in history. I would consider limiting the use of
"she" in the story, and using separate sentences for dialogue so that the piece presents better.
Great description- you had me right there with Daisy. Can't imagine what it was like in those times. Nicely done.
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