The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/11
I think you were paying homage to another work. I've not read this book, but this is what google came up with.. Salem's Lot by Stephen King ? If I'm headed in the wrong you'll have to let me know. :) Your puzzling story is fascinating. :)
03/14/11
Very interesting story. I liked the title and the way it was written.

I am still not sure why it ended like it did.
03/14/11
What an amazing piece of writing. Temptation personified - and in the span of one minute, she can steal us away. I read this three times trying to catch every nuance, but I'm sure there are depths I haven't caught. Awesome.
Congratulations on placing 15th overall!