The Official Writing Challenge
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I clicked on this one for the title, I wanted to know where it was going. I didn't realize it was Biblical fiction until I was halfway through--it was that good! I really like the realistic reactions and the suspense. It was very real.
Imagining the fleshed out details of a familiar Bible story brings the humanity in the story to life. You did an excellent job with this one.
Your story was truly captivating. A wonderful retelling of a familiar Bible story.
Wonderfully told, you could really sense the tension they must have expoerienced on that rooftop. Great writing.
Great storytelling here. I figured it was this story from the beginning, but the telling did not disappoint. Well done.
Enjoyed your character development in this familiar Bible story - nicely done!
Congratulations on placing 25th overall!