The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/11
A stunning story. Well-done.
02/17/11
This is very, very good. Like a golden author come to pay us a visit and allow us to read what it is to write masterfully. I enjoyed every word. A sad tale, truly told, but you sunk me right in the middle of it. And there I sat, in your rain, at your mercy. Thank you very much. I exprienced greatness, tempered with the humility of anointed talent.
02/18/11
You swept me away completely. I don't think I breathed until I got to the end. Incredibly powerful.
02/19/11
Oh Wow! This has to be made into a full length novel.
02/20/11
Wonderfully written. The movement between the scenes was seamless and I could see all of it happening. Now we have to know what happens next! Great job.
02/21/11
I want to write like this when I grow up!
02/21/11
Your writing is pure joy to read. Fabulous!
02/22/11
This is amazing. As others have said, it needs to be a full novel. Wonderful writing.
02/22/11
Oh my! I agree with Catrina...but when I grow up if I can write only half this good, I'd be happy This was remarkable, intense, intriguing, chilling. Wowzers.
02/22/11
Wonderful writing--a story to remember!
02/22/11
This is A spectacular example of a well-written puce. The characters were exquisite and so believable.
02/23/11
Everything wonderful and grand has been said, but I'll try to be original:-)
An authentic Out-of-the-box story. Grand slammer...five stars and.....
02/24/11
Congratulations on yur well deserved win with this amazing story.
02/24/11
Wonderful. You pulled us in with your strong descriptions and maintained the tension throughout. Well done. Congratulations on your win! This is an exceptional work.
02/24/11
What can I say that hasn't already been said? This one was out of the ball park! I stand in awe!
02/24/11
Amazing what the right words in the right places can create! Superb.
02/24/11
Once again, excellent work. Glad to see it recognized! Congrats on the EC!
02/24/11
A sincere WELL DONE, Ann. I loved this piece from the start. A no-doubt deserved first place and bob contender.
02/24/11
Ah. Mystery, suspense and an awesome story rolled into one. I really liked it--especially the way the title played into the ending. It was rather haunting. Nicely done and congrats on your win! ^_^
02/24/11
Congratulations, Ann. Your writing is absolutely outstanding.
02/24/11
Congratulations! This is wonderful.
02/25/11
When I first read this last week, I had it pegged as your work, Ann; and I also thought now this is a winner. Glad to see my instincts were spot on. Congratulations!