The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! So realistic in today's times. Great job.
02/04/11
Wow! Very riveting. So real.
02/04/11
A very intense story. So sad that such things happen, and so hopeful that there is always at least one person whose heroism saves lives. I'm grateful for this glimpse into the mind of one of those heroes!
02/05/11
An exciting and very intense story. Interesting from beginning to end. Thanks
02/06/11
Very, very well written! The work I do drives home to me every day the reality of what is going on in our public schools! I truly appreciate the reality of this story!
02/07/11
I love the surreal feel of the voice, poignant and somehow more touching than focusing on the action. Well done.