The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/11
ROFLOL!! THIS is PRICELESS! Delightfully fun and true. Love that angle coming from the old guy (it was an old man, right?) Funny funny stuff... and then you added that sweet little ending to make the lump rise in my throat. Priceless, absolutely priceless.
02/03/11
I've been one of the "birds" in that nursing home, I think. This was sweet and very enjoyable.
Ditto on probably being one of those "song birds" and I've been privy to their calls from time to time as well. It was fun being in the mind of your MC. Well done and congratulations on your EC.
Loren
02/10/11
I liked the flow of this. It had some great lines in it too...made me laugh and some of it made me want to cry. Well done.
Loved the MC. I hope I'm as kind-spirited in a few years. Well written- I was there with him all the way. Well deserving of your EC!