The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/11
You have given the readers much to think about here (in no particular order): guilt, forgiveness, letting go, healing, friendship, judgment,atonement, and self examination. That's a lot to work into a short story! Good writing.

My only question was how Wanda discovered the little boy was her biological son, but I guess my own imagination will work out those details.
01/28/11
Very interesting and creative. Thanks for sharing.
Congratulations for placing in the top 30 overall!