The Official Writing Challenge
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Well I loved every line of this. Great observations, comparisons, resolve, encouragement. It picked up my spirits. This is more than just an entry, it ministers and is anointed. Very well done in my humble opinion. I like being cheered up and encouraged believe it or not:) Great title too, espcially after reading.
01/22/11
I love love LOVE this! Very nice writing. A devo within a story is the very best way to get your ideas across and point readers to Jesus.
01/22/11
I enjoyed this a lot, much like a devotional but yet very subtle, with a great message. Very nice.
01/23/11
I especially like your ending where she plans to prepare for the next wave... and her source for protection. Very, very nice work!
01/23/11
Excellent analogy and message. My only comment is that from a strictly story standpoint this telling-heavy. I would love to see this expanded into a full story.
What a beautiful analogy. Tell me where can I get my surfboard? :) Great job!
01/24/11
Nice blend of a story and devotional... and a reminder of how God can help us deal with all our own "waves." Well done.