The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/11
You've built natural warmth and feeling through this story to make it a good read.
01/22/11
Bittersweet memories. Nicely done!
01/29/11
My family has been on every ride you described and I could just picture it again as you gave us a mental tour. I like how you mixed the idea of fun and grief, older and younger generations together, just like in life.