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A life-altering moment for both of them!
01/17/11
I love the slow transformation of the young boy, and grandma Nel. Nice job.
01/18/11
You've captured the mindset of a 13 year old so well, although "my growth spurt" seems to show an insight beyond those years.
The episode is full of realism and honesty. Very well put together.
I enjoyed this life lesson and the characters were great!

Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall!
Really enjoyed reading this snippet of life. It all seemed so real, even caught myself thinking I've probably thought the same thoughts at one time or another.