The Official Writing Challenge
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Good developement of character thru his thoughts. Loved the surprise at seeing the blue moon and Mr. Fancy Pants. I enjoyed reading this.
Ooooooh, somebodies in BIG trouble!! Can't wait to see the next chapter in this fun ongoing western saga of Cornerstone Ranch.

Vivid descriptions and wily characters make this a good read. Keep 'em coming!
Shades of a Biblical parable I know and love. Great voice.
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one!
Wow... great visuals, with the setting. I think you've done an amazing job of weaving this tale. It was an extremely enjoyable read!
Congratulations for placing in the top 30 overall!