The Official Writing Challenge
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12/23/10
The Psalms have always been my "go-to" book when feeling overwhelmed, panicky, or confused. I enjoyed this!
12/24/10
You describe so well trying to get back inspiration that has fled. I love the last stanza. The book of Psalms has brought back my calm on many occasions. Just reading those words bring peace. good job.
I was patting my foot all theway to the end and saying, "That's exactly how it is with me!" Thanks for expressing "my" thoughts so clearly!
12/27/10
Thanks for the reminder that the Psalms invite us into God's throne room no matter how we feel or whatever is making no sense at all.
Amen. Can't think of much else to say about this masterful entry. You told it like it is. Congrats on EC. Besides the message, great poem, loved the rythm, the lines, the feel, the voice, the ride. Great job inside and out.
Congratulations, Vincent, on an EC for your well written poem. I liked it the first time I read it and, even more, the second!
I enjoyed your poem. Nice flow and great ending. Congrats on your placing.