The Official Writing Challenge
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Judas still doesn't have a clue, does he? And Peter's still out front. The more things change the more they stay the same. An enjoyable read.
I always enjoy stories that bring New Testament events into the here and now! And I love dramatic sketches. With some extra attention to punctuation (I'm sure you didn't really mean to say "Peter snorts well" :-)), this skit could very well be used to augment a pastoral message.

Quite creative!
Fun take on the story!
Someone else used the term "beat" in their story, but I don't understand what it means.
I enjoyed this modern take. It was fun to read. I did notice in the beginning you used where instead of were a couple of times. But your underlying message was a delight to hear.
11/22/10
Cute. Some of the voice felt a little clunky - read it out loud to get the rhythm of speech. Great creativity.
What an interesting idea for this topic. I thought it was funny when Judas didn't want Jesus to heal the lepers at first, but then changed his mind when he saw it from a media angle. You did a good job with this one. :)