The Official Writing Challenge
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Bravo! Encore! Love this sequel and look forward to perhaps even another installment... tune in next time when you'll hear FW say "and the winner is ------"
{you know who you are ;)}
Love it! You got the characters down pat. Great job! This should be a winner
The "asides" were as excellent as the plot and characterization--my favorite was the reference to the underdog.
I wasn't expecting the story to go inthis direction. I enjoyed the contrast of the two MC. I want to keep reading to find out what will happen next.
Great characters; great story; great writing!
Don't know if it's a winner, but it sure won me over! Loved the oh so professional
writing style, plot details, dialogue al.
Captivating. I want to know what happens next.
Great idea for a story. I was surprised by the Biblical twist. Good job!