The Official Writing Challenge
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I remember reading about this in the news. You've written this very realistically. I am wondering tho' how Ashley was able to go into her bedroom to get her book if she was tied up. Maybe a sentence or two got left out? Other than that, great job.
This was nicely done. It was full of suspense and had a great ending.