The Official Writing Challenge
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There are some great turns of phrase here. It summed up Ernie brilliantly when you said that he was "sniffing around"
Granny is quite wise. Too many people settle for the wrong person and deeply regret it. This was well written and I really enjoyed every word.
The writing is a delight in this piece. The ending seemed to drag just a tad, but I didn't mind much because of the turns of phrase incorporated. Good work.
Like Greghory says about "sniffing around" My mind pictured a dog....

Ohhhhh....good one!

Congrats on your placement!
A very fine piece. You did do an excellent job of showing Ernie to us instead of telling us about him. Congratulations!
So inspiring - never give up on your dreams! I love the depiction of Ernie. Granny is right; you can have sizzle and stability. Great job and congratulations!
How sweet! Engaging and heartening. Congratulations on your EC!
This is great! Congratulations on your EC.
Great job, beautiful told. You had a wise Granny.