The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/10
Oh man. Wow! The ending is powerful. The whole thing is a wonderful picture of life. Wow!
09/03/10
W-O-W! Touched my soul...thank you for sharing!
09/03/10
Oh my--what a beautiful description of love-filled lives through the ages. I'm misty eyed for all the right reasons. Two big thumbs up on this entry.
09/06/10
Sensational. Nothing more to say
09/06/10
This is beautiful I say as I wipe a year from my eye.
09/09/10
Congratulations, Marita! This was well done and you deserve your first place win. I love "seasons of life" stories and this one fit the bill perfectly. I look forward to reading more of your work!
09/09/10
Lovely, exquisite, emotional. Congrats on your well-deserved recognition.
09/09/10
Like Shann stated, as I wipe the tears away, so beautiful. congrats on your placement!
09/09/10
Marita, I just read this for the first time. Of course, it should be #1. It's grand. So filled with emotions that spill over into the reader's own feelings about the same timelines of life.
Superb! Congrats on #1.

Mona
09/09/10
So lovely and so deserving of first place! Congratulations!
09/09/10
Marita, this is simply perfection. I'm in awe! Beautiful!
09/09/10
Way to go! Since I was on vacation I got a chance to read all the entries. I voted this one #1. So glad others agreed. It is wonderful writing.
09/09/10
#1!!!! Congratulations!!!! Sooo proud of you!!!!!
09/09/10
Wow, Mari! This is wonderful with a fantasic ending! I loved traveling the emotional journey with them. ...and about your MC's name -- you warmed my heart -- :) Super congrats, girl, on your 1st place! Love it!
09/09/10
tears dripping down my cheeks. well done, Marita. well-chosen 1st place EC.

nothing more to say :)
09/09/10
Lovely story. Congrats on the win!
09/09/10
Marita, Congrats on a well deserved EC. The #1 spot proves what I have know all along . . . you have a rare talent for putting your heart on the page. Congratulations!!!!!
09/09/10
I pledge my love, ‘til Jesus comes. I love it and I think it ought to take its place in all wedding ceremonies. Absolutely beautiful and so, so deserving of the 1st place spot! Congratulations!
09/09/10
Very deserving first place win. This was awesome and well done. Congrats!
09/09/10
Well-deserved first place win! Wow, Mari! It's a wonderful story. You captured the life of a couple perfectly. Congratulations again!
09/10/10
You deserve first place in EC with this well-written, moving piece!
09/10/10
I liked this piece. I especially enjoyed the ways the years just flicked by in a few years. Good job with your EC.
Keep it up
09/10/10
Heavenly. I need to go get a tissue now. Wow this is good!
09/14/10
I can only "ditto" all the wonderful comments, Marita. This is a beautiful story and worthy of winning!
10/05/10
Just want to offer sincere congratulations on My Groom - the writing and the gift of the memories! Thank you for sharing the gifts of your years.