The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/10
Perfect title for this piece. I found the ending a bit predictable--your title clued me in.
I had a hunch that the compassion-filled friend was going to be the one who was correct in the end. Your story shows how easy it is to judge people unfairly. It was a fun read.
That snazzy (or tattered) book cover can be deceiving! Nice way to remind your readers that first impressions can be foolers.
Congratulations on your EC! You're writing just gets better & better! I'm so excited for you!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.