The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/10
Very cute story and great descriptions of Beauregard and Louie! I could see them both in my mind's eye! I think this could be the basis for a wonderful children's picture book or "cartoon" story.
Awww, loved this. Cute story and I liked getting it from the dogs' perspectives.
08/06/10
I so agree with doing this into a childrens book. With a few revisions it would be perfect.Precious story. Love the last line. Blessings, Ruth
This is one of the best stories I've read. I so enjoyed the conversation and thoughts of the dogs. Outstanding!
Cute story--I love the conclusion.
08/09/10
How clever that the two dogs were the MC's in this piece. I agree with the others--this would make a great illustrated children's book that drives home the power of love.
As a dog lover, I really liked this one! I hope it places because it's so cute and so well written!
08/09/10
Aw, this makes me want to write another dog story! I loved Wooie :-)
08/11/10
I agree, this is one of the best stories this week. Not only did I love it that Louie saved Fern, I really liked the point you drove home with this well-written story.
08/12/10
Interesting read from quite a different perspective! I agree totally that in whatever we do, we should do it with our hearts (Colossians 3:23).
08/12/10
Yay for Louie! Love this story! Congratulations on your EC!!!
08/12/10
WOW... this is awesome! So glad it won first place. Well deserved. I'll be reading it to my kids for sure!
I love how you told this from the point of view of the dogs. Wonderfully written. Congratulations on the top dog spot your piece deserves!
08/12/10
Really loved this. I agree with everyone else. I had fun thinking about reading more of Louie and Beauregard's rivalry. Congratulations.
Congratulations on BOB again, delightfully earned. You plan on keeping that top spot? Happy dancin' with you!
08/12/10
Congrats on toping out this week Mona! Whoohoo! Great, great story and message
08/12/10
Wonderful story and I loved the characterisation of the dogs!
08/12/10
This is great! I like how you can tell Beauregard is a dog from the first sentence, without you ever telling us. And Wooie stole my heart. Congrats on your ec :)
08/18/10
Have only just got round to reading last week's Mona - this is truly great and a very very well deserved win! Wonderful story - I love Louie!