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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Taste (07/15/10)

TITLE: It's a Bird! It's a Plane! It's...a Spoon?
By Ruth Neilson
07/21/10


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I wrinkle my nose as that funny shaped thing comes towards me. I move my head left and right, back and forth trying to avoid it. The dry crispy stuff is good. It's fun to play with even!

I like throwing it to the woof woofs that walk on the floor, 'cept when Mama yells at them to get off the bed. They give funny kisses. And I've tried to give mama kisses like that too, but she doesn’t taste so good.

But I don't know about this mushy, green stuff.

It kinda looks like...

EWWWWW!

NO!

I won't!

You can't! I'll fight ya! I know...baby karate! HI-YA!

HAHA! I gotcha with your own green mush! I told you that I wasn't about to eat that stuff.

Hey...what are you doing?

Why is that thing flying around?

Must...Look...Away...

It's still buzzing! I must resist.

blinks

It wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be. More Mama.

Please?


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Shirley McClay 07/22/10
LOL.. very cute! Still chuckling...
Verna Cole Mitchell 07/24/10
Clever idea...I remember those "feed-the-baby" days.
AnneRene' Capp 07/26/10
Alway fun to see life through the eyes of a child. I always felt guilty feeding my little one something "I" wouldn't have wanted to eat...like the green mush!
Phee Paradise 07/26/10
Adorable.
Christina Banks 07/26/10
Cute!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 07/26/10
This had me laughing out loud. I TOTALLY LOVED IT! I could so picture my own precious babies and green mush flying through the air.
Lollie Hofer 07/28/10
Funny! Funny! Snort! Hee, Hee! Funny! Wheeze! You ger my point. What a fun read.
Beth LaBuff 07/28/10
What a fun, creative, out-of-the box story! Your title makes perfect sense, after reading this! :)
Caitlyn Meissner07/28/10
Wow! That was great! Baby Karate. *laughs* ;D
Kate Oliver Webb07/28/10
So sweet! Yep, very creative, very out-of-the-box, and I wish I'd thought of it! Congratulations on a great story.