The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/10
Original point of view! I enjoyed the unfolding of this, David singing to reassure himself as he gathered his stones, but personally I would have stopped at "the most exciting day of his life." Fun! I can see children gathered around a tale teller and listening to this...
07/15/10
The title drew me to this story, as it is the title of one of my favorite books. I enjoyed your amusing retelling of David's story
07/15/10
Who doesn't love, 'Long ago in a land far away...'? I know I do.
What a delightful, fresh story for children of all ages.

Mona
07/16/10
Cute remake of a familiar story all kids remember from Sunday School. I can picture this with illustrations for a children's book.
Oh, I like the stones with personalities and voices. What a clever idea for this topic with an original take on an old story!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and for the Editor's Choice.
07/29/10
Well done, Sharon. Lovely, and original, and fun! Congrats on your creativity!
08/21/10
Wow! What a neat, neat story! One for every Sunday School Class. Thanks.