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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Hear (07/08/10)

TITLE: Lamentations
By Kenn Allan
07/15/10


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LAMENTATIONS

How loudly must I plead, O Lord,
Before my prayer is heard?
How can my anguish be ignored
From judgments not incurred?

My soul is sodden with dismay
From debts I must abide,
While all my daydreams drift away
Upon the evening tide.

Am I outnumbered by the meek,
Whose steadfast faith inspires?
Or has my inner voice grown weak
From counting vain desires?

There must be failings, I surmise,
For which I must atone
Before you hearken to the cries
Of one who weeps alone.

Can selfless deeds unseal my fate?
What is required of me?
No earthly task would be too great
To set my spirit free.

The hope grows cold within my heart
And music flees my soul
As each new journey you impart
Strays further from my goal.

But I await your silent voice
Beneath this dismal sky
And struggle with the final choice—
To curse my life or die.


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Beth LaBuff 07/16/10
Wow! Exquisite from the title through the final word. The despair and anguish of the speaker pour from his soul. This phrase touched me, "The hope grows cold within my heart -- And music flees my soul…" This is so reminiscent of the Psalms (and Lamentations).
Verna Cole Mitchell 07/17/10
This is an excellent rendition of a lament with no hope. I'm glad that our hope is secure in Christ who gained the victory over death for us.
Mona Purvis07/18/10
Very well-written tragedy of the human soul.
Powerful message in rhyme.

Mona
Chely Roach07/18/10
Authentic. Raw. Superb. Wow.
Margaret Kearley 07/19/10
A cry from the depths of the heart - an amazing and wonderful poem. Thankyou.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 07/19/10
This touched my heart. There have been many days when the feelings from this poem could be my own.
Joan Campbell07/19/10
Your poetry is somewhat legendary on this site and I can see why. These words flow so naturally and impart such deep emotion. I believe you will, once more, inspire and teach many of us here!
AnneRene' Capp 07/19/10
Impressively artistically grandeur!

Carol Slider 07/20/10
A beautifully written expression of those times when it seems our fervent prayers are not heard. It reminded me of C.S. Lewis's writings after the death of his wife. Heartfelt and real--well done.
Charla Diehl 07/22/10
So glad that you are back in the weekly challenge--and yes, I agree with the one who said you are somewhat of a legend at FW. This poem was raw emotion, stirring and heartfelt.


   
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