The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/10
This, I believe, was out-of-the-box. Very good story. Very believable. Good job.
05/24/10
As the title suggests, this is unusual, unique, and interesting. I had a hard time really connecting with the MC, but discovered the disengaged voice worked. Good work.
I really liked the beginning and ending pulled together. It brought a unique voice to the piece. Well done!
05/27/10
This is wonderfully creative for the topic. Congratulations on your editor's choice award!
05/28/10
Congratulation on your EC Folakemi. This drew me in completely as a reader - fantastic job!