The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this story! Yay for the uncle! And I want to read MORE.
This is just a mere chapter of the beginning of an amazing book. I want to read more.
Reminds me of Corrie-Ten Boom and Anne Frank. I want to read more!
Nice detail and story line. I too would love to find out what happens next. God bless.
Great beginning of a story. This causes me to want to know what comes next. Good job?
Gripping really drew me in at the half-way point. Lots of good drama here.
I agree with the above--I want more, too! A very well-written story; you did so well with the atmosphere and dialog. (I think you meant "tousled" when you said "tussled"--but very minor in such a great piece!)
I'd definitely like to read the rest of this story. A fascinating beginning!
Congratulations on the top 40!