The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I thought it was going to be romantic and then a crocodile got involved. lol. Very cute poem. And it's true? Yikes!
Is it really true - or just an alli-gation?
Amazing and very clever of you to pen a poem about such a scary event. Does this mean there is 'verse' to come?
i enjoyed this story, especially the way you did the -ing endings. I did not know that was allowed!
This is a terrific entry! I found myself tapping in the desk while reading it! Kudos!
Beautiful !
I loved knowing this was true. What a fun poem! Thanks!
Oh wow! What a fright that must have been! My favorite lines, in your fun poem, "Across the still water, and skillfully sliding -- To snap any creature not suitably hiding." The kids invention of a game about "Mr. Croc Salivating" made me smile!
Great poem!
This sent chills up and down my spine. One reason is because, well, it is a true story has to do with crocs. The second is because it is very well-written and fun to read. Loved the description of her in her bikini.