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02/11/10
Thank You, God, for second chances!
02/11/10
Personally, you have captured some very intimate moments I have had with the Lord in recent years. This was spoken with much emotion and I felt it. I praise Him that we can come to Him with every groan. Thanks.
Good reminder that there are others who have screamed the same words...I think a lot of us have been there - this reads like a modern day David.... lots of emotion, with a faith building ending.
02/17/10
I can definitely identify with the emotion you express here. I really like the way the emphasis on "Be still." It felt like a booming but loving voice tell where peace could be found.
02/18/10
This is beautiful. You have captured many a heart cry. Thank you
02/18/10
Ruth, congrats on placing in Level 4!

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