The Official Writing Challenge
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A nice, fun read. I enjoyed it. Thanks.
I love it when I learn a new word! I even discovered if both boys' bellies were growling it would have been entitled Borborygmi and Dust Bunnies. You captured a beautiful vision of a very patient mommy and a fairly brave little boy. Good job.
02/09/10
Too funny! Some people's tummy's growl really funny. Good entry.

Mona
What a great and creative way to tie in the theme to something so tangible. I could see this playing out in real life.
02/11/10
What a fun story! I loved the interaction between the mother and the little boy. Congratulations!