The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/09
Very nice—one small correction. It was Rahab I think you meant. Well done.
12/16/09
I reall enjoyed this poem, especially the repeated lines which adds to the central message. I would think that a male/female narration of this would be as beautiful to hear as this was beautiful to read.
Very, very nice work.
12/16/09
Soooooo enjoyable ... yes, that is the right word ... your words made the colors dance within my soul ...
12/16/09
I like the way you have woven colour truths and Biblical history together to make this a meaningful poem. Colin
12/16/09
You have great word choices in your free-verse poem (and much creativity with the Bible characters/colors).
04/27/10
Ruth, I'm going to feature this in the Front Page Showcase for the week of May 24. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!