The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/09
Your story reminded me of watching natives of Mexico use the most primitive tools to produce beautiful museum quality work. A beautiful reminder of the master's touch as he molds and makes us.
12/07/09
I liked all your "artist details" while he worked the clay. There's a whole message in that!
12/08/09
Well done--short and sweet.
I like the analogy, and how the flawed creation gets SMASHED down. Powerful.
12/09/09
love stories about clay in the potter's hands. in fact i attend a church called Potters Place. great job.
12/09/09
Very well done, I've always loved the scriptures about the clay and the potter.
12/09/09
Cute! I like it and I especially like the character of Steven. Would love to know more about him. Great job.
12/10/09
Beautifully crafted story. One that will stay with me. Your depiction of the flaws in the clay and the violent smashing and loving reworking is a metaphor I can relate to in my own life. Thank you for the wonderful picture you've presented here.