The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story reminded me of watching natives of Mexico use the most primitive tools to produce beautiful museum quality work. A beautiful reminder of the master's touch as he molds and makes us.
12/07/09
I liked all your "artist details" while he worked the clay. There's a whole message in that!
12/08/09
Well done--short and sweet.
I like the analogy, and how the flawed creation gets SMASHED down. Powerful.
12/09/09
love stories about clay in the potter's hands. in fact i attend a church called Potters Place. great job.
12/09/09
Very well done, I've always loved the scriptures about the clay and the potter.
12/09/09
Cute! I like it and I especially like the character of Steven. Would love to know more about him. Great job.
Beautifully crafted story. One that will stay with me. Your depiction of the flaws in the clay and the violent smashing and loving reworking is a metaphor I can relate to in my own life. Thank you for the wonderful picture you've presented here.