The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/09
Beautiful descriptions throughout. Watch your spelling and punctuation in a few places, otherwise a truly lovely piece!
12/08/09
How nice to read a seasonal entry on this December morning!

I felt that the first sentence was really only there to tie in to the topic, and didn't really have much to do with the rest of the story.

You've really put me in a Christmas-y mood this morning!