The Official Writing Challenge
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11/26/09
This has a treasure trove of golden words! Love the descriptions-they flow like the water fall trickling in your story.

A satisfying ending as well. Very nicely done!
Looks like a lot of research went into this :)... Such a sweet story. This was pleasurable to read and I love the vivid imagery. I could smell the orange blossoms. Aren't they wonderful?
This is beautiful! I loved the comfortable relationship between husband and wife. Wonderful descriptions too.
11/28/09
beautiful, beautiful, beautiful imagery.
You spent some time on this and it shows! What a beautiful entry! Big time Kudos!