The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
Especially love that last stanza.
The crocus is one of my favorite spring flowers for exactly the reason you penned. I really liked the way you concluded this poem...as fleeting beauty should always be done...with hope to rise again.
11/15/09
Can't even put my finger on what it is about it - I just like the whole of it. Well done.
11/15/09
Very well written! I love spring and you have captured the part of it I enjoy the most. Lovely! Laura