The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
This entry shows much depth of emotion and gives an intimate glimpse into the very heart of the survivors soul. Exquisite writing!

I have to be honest however; a talking notebook is cute but I had trouble with it here given the serious nature of Abby's story. IMHO, the story would be more believable if told from a different POV. Save the talking notebook for a more lighthearted subject maybe?

I love this line: Above us the carillon peals down the day, into the last segment of an evening hour.