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10/22/09
Great imagery throughout this poetic piece.
I love all the images in this gorgeous poem, but "carbon bits of waltzing coal"-- now that's genius!
Beautiful in imagery and lyrical cadence. A life lesson to ponder as well. Magnificent!
Great words, nicely put.

Indeed, the magnificence of GOD is awesome and full of mercies!

Thanks for sharing.
10/28/09
This all felt very wise and deep. Excellent imagery. It was probably on purpose to leave out "verse" spacing (can't you tell I'm not a poet??), but it would have made it easier for me to read had there been blocks of lines. Make any sense?
10/28/09
I went soaring with them, smooth as silk. I marvel at this creation of God and your ability to share it with your readers.

Mona
Lovely. Excellent imagery. 'Nuff said.
10/28/09
What a marvelous, delightful gift you have. Just...wow.
10/28/09
Wow! I loved immersing myself in this. Your descriptive phrases are superb! Beautiful artistry here!
10/28/09
This is the kind of poetry that makes you want to savor each word. Absolutely gorgeous!