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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Red (10/01/09)

TITLE: The Perilous Power of the Red Pen
By Melanie Kerr
10/03/09


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Princethorpe Elementary School
Was first to implement the rule
That ticks and crosses, comments made
The use of red ink should evade

Teachers must show great respect
When pupil’s work they oft’ correct
Soothing shades of blue or green
Upon the pages should be seen

Every single spelling error
In every child induces terror
When it’s scribed in bright red ink
It makes the child inclined to think

“Must improve” “Not good enough”
Or some such sad and gloomy stuff
Demoralised, with drooping head
They falter on the road ahead

Marks in red are seldom kind
They stamp upon the fragile mind
Red ink is demotivating
Gentle green is more sedating

But green might soon the new red be
A danger that we must forsee
It makes no difference, red or green
If umpteen crosses can be seen

Let’s promptly praise the things done right
Not merely hammer every blight
And stem the urge to cotton rap!
It’s just as much a hidden trap

Is this just teaching going wrong?
In classrooms do red pens belong?
A balanced path we tread with care
This path of learning that we share



Author’s Note - Hundreds of schools have banned teachers marking in red ink because it is felt to be too distressing for pupils.


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Lynda Schultz 10/08/09
Until I read your author's note I thought you were kidding—guess not! How silly can we get. Great poem and a very apt lesson.
Charla Diehl 10/08/09
Cute poem that drives the point home that it doesn't matter what color the ink is, when the criticisms outweigh the compliments, therein lies the crushing problem.
Mona Purvis10/08/09
Your poem says so much of what is wrong in our society. Very interesting way to use the topic.
Mona
Joshua Janoski10/11/09
You make an excellent point in this poem. It's not the color of the ink but the emphasis on criticism rather than praise that is the problem. Reminds me of my college days and those English essays full of red ink. Good use of the topic!
Jan Ackerson 10/12/09
I loved my red pen, when I was a teacher!

Very good poem, gives the reader a grin, but also a shake of the head.
Laury Hubrich 10/14/09
Too cute. I believe teachers still use red pens in our high school. The kids are living through it - so far:)
Shilo Goodson10/14/09
I enjoyed your poem. It's sad that people think that a red mark on a paper is going to harm a child that much.


   
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