The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/09
Nice story. Kinda like life here in this small Midwest town.
09/19/09
I liked the gentle nature of your MC and his wife. The dialog moved the story along at a nice pace, and the ending assures us that we never retire from bringing people to God.
09/19/09
Your humble characters warmed me. I like their decision - they can't retire from the Lord's work. Nice job.
09/21/09
George and Marilyn will have a great retirement doing what the Lord wants them to do. Very nice story.
09/23/09
I enjoyed your story. The characters were real and their decision inspiring.
09/23/09
You know as I read this I kept picturing "George" in my mind...He was "Jimmy Stewart" unique voice and all! Good job writing and good message that we never retire from serving God.
~Cathy~