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Very cool. Just imagine Eve, not knowing how the birth experience worked. Wow! Love this. Only wish it were longer.
Your story really makes me wonder what Eve thought, having had no experience of a new baby. I like how you showed that while God had them leave the Garden of Eden, He did not take away His guidance from Adam and Eve.
You have described and captured the scene of the first born on earth in painful labor very well!
Hmmm.... Eve and the very first birth... never really considered what that might have been like for her.I agree this piece could be developed into a very interesting longer story. Good job!