The Official Writing Challenge
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I was actually holding my breath until I read, "And then you cried." (You could actually leave out the line "You were okay" because the previous one says it all.)Your descriptions are poetically beautiful. The last line is perfect for this wonderful story.
08/28/09
An unconventional but effective writing style that carries the reader along to a very satisfactory conclusion. Powerfully written
Your story took me away. Usually I have trouble being patient enough to read whole articles. Yours I read twice and wanted a copy to read later.
You have a gift for sure.
:)
08/29/09
I love your title. So glad the little baby was healthy. Very good entry.
09/03/09
Wow! What a story...definitely breathed a sigh of relief when the little fellow cried. congarts on your EC.
09/03/09

Congratulations! And thank you for such a wonderful story.
09/03/09
So special. Just like our Father to give us an opportunity to know He cares. This is a wonderful story of praise.
Love it.
Mona