The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/09
How cute. Love the relationship between Kate and Emily and glad Emily reached out to Kate to get her out and about with her trusty dog too!
07/18/09
You described everything perfectly, and had me smiling and giggling. I the ending is awesome! (I also have the urge to put on my super-wheels and take the dog for a walk.)
07/19/09
Filled with charm and add to that, a spirit of playful affection.

Loved it.
Hehe, fun story. The line a about spotting "the body that belongs to the little girl’s voice" made me think for a minute that the girl's body was lying on the path, but the next line set my mind at ease.
Neighbors can be so much fun. I enjoyed this!
07/22/09
I'd say that Kate really is a superhero for being such a good role model to a girl who needs one! This has real charm and genuine feeling--well done.
07/22/09
Loved the relationship between these two. Excellent writing, as usual. ;-)
What a delightful read. I agree that neighbors can be such fun, too. I like your writing style very much, Laurie. Kudos.
07/22/09
LOL! Go super-kate, Go! Does she have go-go boots? And a booster wrislets, so she can store extra-superpowers inside? ^_^ A fun and really cute read! I loved these too! Simply darling!