The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/09
Wow. This was heavy. Perfect title, btw. You did a fantastic job of portraying the grief that fades to an itch under the skin...great imagery.
06/14/09
Wow! You about took us to Hell and back again in 750 words. I am so glad they found their way back. Well done for some very powerful writing.
06/16/09
Oh, so sad! I could feel the sufferings of your mc in this story. I'm glad for the hope they were able to find, and yes, it can only from the Lord. I can't even begin to imagine going through this type of suffering without Him. Without actually saying it, you brought out a good point. God is in so hurry for things to be "fixed" and get better. It was a slow process that they had to go through but He did help them find their way. Thanks for sharing.
06/16/09
Whoops! "God is in so hurry.." should have been "God is in no hurry..."
06/24/09
Sad, yet you ended on such a happy note. Yes, with God we can be restored to live our lives fully--with His help. I felt the pain of your MC and your picture words brought each character to life for me. That's great writing!