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06/14/09
A lovely story showing how children can be 'children of our love' even if they are not 'children of our flesh'. This must be one of the most powerful reflections of God's love that man can ever know.
I also enjoyed the opening scene - very familiar!
06/14/09
What a wonderful story of this woman's true heart's desire. Perfect title for the piece, and a tender story.
06/24/09
This story moved along at a nice pace without being weighed down by too many details. I, too, found the dad and son wake up scene endearing. This tender sweet story has my vote.