The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
What a great story of a father's love. Very nice.
06/05/09
This story moved along nicely with the dialog. The MC's voice was tender and real to me. Good job.
06/09/09
Love the characterization and interior monologue. I was completely engross, and enamored with that sweet girl.