The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/09
I was also quite curious as to what the actual issue was - but this was wonderfully described. I was there. Great imagery!
I thought the viewpoint was that of a woman. After reading it again, it could be anyone and perhaps that is what you intended. Good job.
06/02/09
Excellent description of any number of situations. Well-written.