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Oooh, so did she? Did she really do that? Make it too tight for her to fit into? Good suspense, I liked the way you wove this story and I felt sad for poor Sally.
You did a good job of revealing your MC in this period piece. I felt so sorry for her.
Would the dress be too tight? Was the dress really in the box? Hmmm...
Great job getting into MC's head.
Ooh! I get to decide what happens at the wedding. Delicious. I enjoyed the mc's voice in this story and could feel her struggle. Since I love it when good wins over evil, the dress looked beautiful on the bride.
Really good sense of time and place here.

I like that you left it open-ended for the reader to figure out. Of course she did the right thing and the dress is beautiful and a perfect fit. ;0)

I enjoyed this.
What an interesting story! The characterization was great and I could envision the entire scene and the two young ladies vividly! Excellent writing!