The Official Writing Challenge
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I like that line--Taxes become the manure of our lives. I'm going to remember that one. You did a good job with that analogy. The play-on-words with the title and the last line was clever, and your description of spring well done.
05/07/09
LOL! I can relate to this kind of in and out dance, either I choose to breathe freely indoors or be miserable outside. What a light touch of humor on topic. Nice!
05/12/09
I don't know how I managed to goof up so BIG but I did just that. After reading your story I went to leave a comment but it didn't end up here. You'll find my comments on the story, "God's Breath." Only I can make a goofy mistake like that (blush, blush)! The writer of the other story is scratching her head trying to figure out how I could remotely think her story is manure (blush, blush)!
This is neat. You and I have "opposite" allergies. I am allergic to indoor stuff, so I can envy you in the winter when I'm sneezing at wood smoke and you can envy me in the spring. lol

I have to check God's Breath now (teehee)
Patty