The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/09
This was very nicely thought out and done. Message, flow and rhyme all worked very well!
I write these kind of poetic stories and enjoy reading ones that work!
04/28/09
Oh, this needs to be set to a simple, pretty melody and sung! Beautiful!
04/29/09
This is beautiful!
I felt like I just had a slice of heaven. Beautiful!