The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/09
Hot, but not quite a fire consuming everything it should. Important lesson, Nicely done.
I love Biblical re-tellings such as this one, and you did it with a lot of flair and excitement. I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I think it was a very unique take on this week's topic.
04/19/09
Very good job at adding imagery and emotion to this Bible story!
04/19/09
How a man can burn that hot for God but turn a cold-shoulder to His Will is a perfect picture the ongoing saga of man's relationship with his Creator. "Cold" may too subtle to get full points for Topic, but this Biblical fiction piece rocks! Very nice.
Your words for "annointed" bring the essence of this Bible story alive. Good writing. I truly is sad that such an annointed man did not turn his passion into following God.
04/21/09
I enjoyed reading this story that is a reminder to us to stay true to God.