The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/09
Deep. Very nicely done.
I enjoyed your mid-spring snow along with you, a very creative take on hot and cold
04/19/09
WONDERFUL alliteration, with all of those gorgeous "B" sounds! My favorite poem this week, by far!
Good job! This flows so nicely!
04/19/09
Winter in Texas was exactly like that this year! I loved your use of words, especially in the absolutely gorgeous last stanza. Well done.
04/19/09
You painted an accurate portrait of the unpredictability of nature, segue nicely into the comparison to the unpredictability of life.

The first two stanzas have a wonderful rhythm that begged me to read them out loud. I sense a transition in the stanzas that follow..not only in the meter but in the mood. I'm not enough of a poetry connoisseur to appreciate the technicalities, but I did feel the heart of your words. I was drawn to read to the end.