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03/12/09
I am appalled. Excellent story, but so sad.
03/12/09
A horrifying story but one that sounds all too authentic. Would to God that such tragedies were not as common as they sadly are!
03/13/09
So heartbreaking. You brought across the terrible angst in that poor girl's heart so clearly. Wow.
What a heartbreaking condition for a woman to endure.I especially liked the description in your second paragraph.
03/17/09
Bitter and ugly. It is so hard to even think about. Leaves the reader in pain for the victims and helpless.
Mona
This is so sad! To think this is a life they have been indoctinated to believe is right. Father forgive them, they do not know what they do, is my cry.
03/17/09
I'm amazed at the way you can capture the reader with the story of this girl's life with such few words. It definitely is a terrible tragedy that this happens. May they find God's grace in the midst of their suffering.