The Official Writing Challenge
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Well-written story. I could picture what was happening and feel the character's emotions.

On a side note...What an interesting coincidence that the MC for my challenge entry this week has the same name (Nalini). PM me for the title, if you'd like.
Excellent descriptions, and an extremely engaging tale! Very well-told.
WOW! This is amazing! Lots of good descriptions and you've certainly done your research! I remember hearing stories of Choorile and Jumbees. You brought to life this special story. So glad it ended the way it did. ^_^ Good job!